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雅思9分范文是怎樣的?

雅思9分范文是怎樣的?

雅思小作文9分范文

話題

福彩快3The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.

這張地圖顯示了城鎮新超市的平面圖 Garlsdon。有兩個可能的位置。請回答。

9 分范文:

The map shows two potential locations (S1 and S2) for a new supermarket in a town called Garlsdon.

福彩快3The main difference between the two sites is that S1 is outside the town, whereas S2 is in the town centre. The sites can also be compared in terms of access by road or rail, and their positions relative to three smaller towns.

Looking at the information in more detail, S1 is in the countryside to the north west of Garlsdon, but it is close to the residential area of the town. S2 is also close to the housing area, which surrounds the town centre.

福彩快3There are main roads from Hindon, Bransdon and Cransdon to Garlsdon town centre, but this is a no traffic zone, so there would be no access to S2 by car. By contrast, S1 lies on the main road to Hindon, but it would be more difficult to reach from Bransdon and Cransdon. Both supermarket sites are close to the railway that runs through Garlsdon from Hindon to Cransdon.(171)

附雅思申論考官基本套路

第 1 段: 重述專題

福彩快3第 2 段: 總結主題數據的主要特征或規則

福彩快3第 3 段: 詳細特征規則 1

福彩快3第 4 段: 詳細特征規則 2

注: simon 考官主張雅思作文不用總結!大家可以注意這一點。當然,一篇小作文是否需要總結段落是沒有定論的。

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發表于 2020-03-16

雅思地圖題攻略

1) 文章結構

下面以 Cam911 為例,討論歷史變化圖問題的編寫。Cam911 的標題是: the two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities, 是指旅游設施建設前后島嶼的變化。

以下是劍橋雅思給出的 7 個例子:

福彩快3The two maps show the same island while first one is before and the second one is after the construction for tourism.

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Looking first at the one before construction, we can see a huge island with a beach in the west. The total length of the island is approximately 250 metres.

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Moving on to the second map, we can see that there are lots of buildings on the island. There are two areas of accommodation. One is in the west near the beach while the other one is in the centre of the island. Between them, there is a restaurant in the north and a central reception block, which is surrounded by a vehicle track. This track also goes down to the pier where people can go sailing in the south sea of the island. Furthermore, tourists can swim near the beach in the west. A footpath connecting the western accommodation units also leads to the beach.

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Overall, comparing the two maps, there are significant changes after this development. Not only lots of facilities are built on the island, but also the sea is used for activities. The new island has become a good place for tourism.

福彩快3從這個例子中,我們可以看到歷史變化圖問題的文章結構:

l 開場白: 重寫標題

l 中段 1: 寫圖 1?

l 中間段 2: 圖 2

福彩快3l 收尾段: 總結圖 1 和圖 2 所示的整體變化

有幾點需要解釋:

首先,這個例子的結構是總分,但是如果你在開始時直接給出一個總結,也可以在中間部分展開討論, 這就變成了總分的結構,本質上沒有區別。此外,歷史變遷式地圖描繪了某個地方的發展與進步,所以文字 industrialized 、在結尾部分的摘要中經常使用 modernized 等。

福彩快3其次,這種寫法中間的段數隨圖而異,但好在真題一般只有 2-4 個圖,一般不超過 4 個圖, 因此,全文第 4-6 段仍然可以接受。具體到每個圖形,復雜程度是不同的。不管有多少張圖片,如果每張圖片的內容比較多,并且多張圖片之間顯示的變化比較明顯,一般的變化分為兩種,即, 一些項目已經消失或縮小,而另一些項目已經出現或擴大。在這種情況下,可以考慮另一種編寫方法:

l 開頭: 改寫題目,在圖中寫出地點的整體方位, 并指出兩種類型的變化 (消失/減少 vs 出現/展開,如 The xx years have witnessed the growth or emergence of some items and the downsizing or disappearance of some others.)

福彩快3l 中間段 1: 寫入消失/減少的地圖項

福彩快3l 中段 2: 寫出現/展開的地圖項

福彩快3l 結束段: 總結總體變化

這兩篇文章的結構沒有區別。在實際寫作中,我們應該選擇能夠更清晰地表達地圖的結構。上面 Cam911 的例子只有 7 分。不是文章的結構不清楚,而是一些詳細的信息以及詞匯和句型需要改進。有關詳細信息,請參閱考官的評價:

This answer clearly presents the key features of the diagrams, and although the first map is described only briefly, this is acceptable for this particular task. The description is accurate though some aspects, such as the section on the accommodation, could have been more fully extended. The final paragraph summarises the main points effectively. The information is logically organised and can be easily followed throughout the response. A range of cohesive devices including reference and substitution is used appropriately, with only occasional inaccuracies. Some less common vocabulary and collocations are used appropriately, e.g. central reception block; western accommodation units, and there are no spelling errors. There is a variety of grammatical structures and many sentences contain no inaccuracies. Where errors do occur, they do not affect understanding.

2) 兩個核心要素

福彩快3無論采用哪種文章結構,地圖主題都應該寫得很清楚,應該落實到一個句子和其中使用的單詞中,這兩者都涉及兩個核心要素: 方位和變化,即文中的句子都是在描述“某某項目的某個位置發生了什么變化 ”。

a ) 方位角

地圖包含許多項目,因此只需取出一個項目就可以更容易地解釋其位置。然而,將這些項目組織成一段文本涉及每個項目的組織順序。一般來說,有兩個想法值得參考:

l 兩側的軸中心

例如,Cam911, 可以使用 pier-reception-? restaurant 是整個地圖的中心軸,然后會描述兩邊的 accommodation 和最遠端的 beach.}

福彩快3l 起點,移動改變風景

福彩快3另外以 Cam911 為例,您可以想象一個游客游覽這個島嶼的過程,通常從 pier 開始,然后在 {127, 然后您可以留在 accommodation 或進入 restaurant 吃晚餐、休息或在 beach 去游泳晚飯后。具體到主題 Cam911,以上兩種方法差別不大。

帶 OG

Test7 的地圖名為 example。如果采用上述第一篇文章結構,即先寫第一張圖片,然后寫第二張圖片,那么在寫第一張圖片時, 圖片上的每一項都要描述清楚,可以先寫 River} Stroke 說明 Stokeford 的大致位置,然后寫 bridge 連接中間的主干道,然后以主干道為中軸線描述兩邊的項目。

在詞語方面,介詞常用來表示方位,當然還有名詞、形容詞等。

in

表示 A 在 B 里面,例如下面的例子中,in the west 是在 in the west of the island, 里面寫的,即 beach (A) 在 island 里面 (內部 {145。

[Cam911-7 個示例] Looking first at the one before construction, we can see a huge island with a beach in the west.

on

可以說 A 在 B 之上,例如下面的例子中,buildings 在 island 之上。

[Cam911-7 個示例] Moving on to the second map, we can see that there are lots of buildings on the island.

也可以說,A 邊框為 B,并且在 A 和 {160 之間一般屬于同一級別。

福彩快3Shanghai is on the east of Jiangsu.

to/off to

福彩快3表示 A 和 B 的相對方向,不強調是否分開。如果要強調分離,可以加 off.

Beijing is to the north of Shanghai.

Japan is off to the east of China.

at

福彩快3在特定地點指示。

福彩快3At the northeastern corner of the town lies a shopping mall.

along

意思是 “沿著”。

The port is along the roadside.

outside

意思是 A 可以用作 {175 以外的名詞、形容詞、介詞和副詞。

on the outside of something

福彩快3to be outside the range

福彩快3east/west/north/south ,eastern/western/northern/southern

福彩快3意思是東、西、北、南、北。掌握名詞和形容詞是必須的,當然還有 northeast/northeastern 等。

福彩快3[Cam911-7 個示例] Looking first at the one before construction, we can see a huge island with a beach in the west.

left/right/upper/lower side/part/half

表示上、下、左、右,可以單獨使用,也可以連接 side/part/half 等表示 “部分”。

The truck is to the right of the gas station.

福彩快3upper/lower-left/right corner

它表示左上角和右下角等四個角,用于直接表示地圖的方向為圖。

The bank is in the top upper-left corner of the residential zone.

福彩快3middle/centre/top/bottom/crossing

福彩快3它表示中間、頂部、底部、交叉點等,可以表示地圖所指的真實物體中的位置, 并且還可以將地圖指示為圖形中的方向。

[Cam911-7 個示例] One is in the west near the beach while the other one is in the centre of the island.

halfway/in the middle between A and B

福彩快3表示 C 在 A 和 {220 之間的中點。

福彩快3The supermarket is halfway between the bank and the barber 's.

parallel

表示 “平行”。

The buildings are parallel to the rivers.

福彩快3opposite/facing/across

意思是 “相反”。

福彩快3The buildings are parallel to the rivers.

The supermarket is directly opposite to the bus stop.

surround

動詞,意思是 “環繞”。

福彩快3[Cam911-7 個示例] Between them, there is a restaurant in the north and a central reception block, which is surrounded by a vehicle track

close to/next to/in close proximity to/in the vicinity of/near/beside/ nearby/adjacent

福彩快3指示 A 接近 {243。

福彩快3[Cam911-7 個示例] One is in the west near the beach while the other one is in the centre of the island.

front/back/in front of/in the front of

表示在前面或后面 ”。

circle

福彩快3表示 “圓”。

The two groups of accommodations each form a circle.

福彩快3lie/be located/be situated/

表示 “已定位”。

b ) 更改

福彩快3歷史變化類型圖本來是為了顯示一個地方隨時間的變化,所以有必要用單詞和句型來表達變化。各種變化無非就是上面提到的兩類: 出現/擴張,或消失/收縮。

become/turn/get bigger/larger/smaller/shorter/longer

部門動詞,比較度,表示變化。一個詞的具體含義是由部門動詞后面的形容詞決定的。

福彩快3newly built/established /constructed

福彩快3表示 “新建”。

福彩快3disappear/no longer there

意思是 “消失”。

福彩快3extend/enlarge/develop/add /rise/grow/increase /improve

表示 “擴展”。

reduce/decline/decrease/drop/fall/halve /degrade

福彩快3表示 “縮小”。

replace /remove/convert /give way to

表示 “替換”,I.出現 e.A 消失 B。

connect/change/turn over/straighten/construct/complete/open

指示 “完成” 等更改。

福彩快3綜上所述,地圖問題分為兩種類型,選址問題和歷史變化問題。選址問題的關鍵在于分析各方案的優缺點,得出最終結論。歷史變遷的話題主要在于對不同年份之間地圖上的變化進行比較分析。在具體寫作中,每個項目的定位和變化都要寫清楚,其中,定位所涉及的整體描述順序是最關鍵的。

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